{"id":220163,"date":"2024-08-20T12:24:08","date_gmt":"2024-08-20T10:24:08","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/?p=220163"},"modified":"2026-10-19T15:29:07","modified_gmt":"2026-10-19T13:29:07","slug":"comment-faire-un-commentaire-compose","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/comment-faire-un-commentaire-compose\/","title":{"rendered":"Comment faire un commentaire compos\u00e9 : m\u00e9thode et exemple corrig\u00e9"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>Le <strong>commentaire compos\u00e9<\/strong> est l\u2019un des deux sujets au choix de l\u2019\u00e9preuve \u00e9crite de fran\u00e7ais du bac, avec la dissertation. Il t\u2019attend en fin de premi\u00e8re, puis souvent dans le sup\u00e9rieur. Cet exercice peut faire peur, par sa dur\u00e9e et son cadre assez strict. Bonne nouvelle : avec une m\u00e9thode claire, il devient beaucoup plus simple. <strong>Voici la m\u00e9thode \u00e9tape par \u00e9tape, une introduction r\u00e9dig\u00e9e et un exemple corrig\u00e9<\/strong> \ud83d\udc47<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"quest-ce-quun-commentaire-compose\">Qu\u2019est-ce qu\u2019un commentaire compos\u00e9 ?<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>Un commentaire compos\u00e9 est <strong>l\u2019analyse organis\u00e9e d\u2019un texte litt\u00e9raire<\/strong>, en prose ou en vers. Tu y d\u00e9fends une interpr\u00e9tation du texte, en montrant comment la forme (les proc\u00e9d\u00e9s d\u2019\u00e9criture) construit le sens. Ton analyse suit un <strong>plan th\u00e9matique, en deux ou trois parties<\/strong>, qui r\u00e9pond \u00e0 une probl\u00e9matique.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Au bac g\u00e9n\u00e9ral, l\u2019\u00e9preuve \u00e9crite de <a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/cours\/francais\">fran\u00e7ais<\/a> dure <strong>4 heures<\/strong> et compte pour un coefficient 5. Tu choisis entre un commentaire et une dissertation. Le texte \u00e0 commenter est li\u00e9 \u00e0 un objet d\u2019\u00e9tude du programme de premi\u00e8re, mais il n\u2019est pas extrait d\u2019une des \u0153uvres au programme (<a href=\"https:\/\/www.education.gouv.fr\/bo\/20\/Special7\/MENE2019312N.htm\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">note de service, BO sp\u00e9cial n\u00b0 6 du 31 juillet 2020<\/a>). Tu le d\u00e9couvres donc le jour de l\u2019\u00e9preuve. En voie technologique, le sujet de commentaire est formul\u00e9 pour te guider.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Ce que le correcteur attend de toi :<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>une lecture organis\u00e9e du texte, et non un r\u00e9sum\u00e9 ;<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>une interpr\u00e9tation justifi\u00e9e par des analyses pr\u00e9cises et des citations ;<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>un lien constant entre le fond (ce que dit le texte) et la forme (comment il le dit) ;<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>une expression correcte : la ma\u00eetrise de la langue est \u00e9valu\u00e9e dans toutes les copies.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n<section class=\"you-know\">\n                <div class=\"you-know__title\"><p>Ok, c&rsquo;est une dissert&rsquo;.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n                        <div class=\"you-know__text\">\n            <p>Mmmmhhh&#8230; Non. Il ne faut pas confondre <strong>commentaire compos\u00e9 et dissertation<\/strong>, qui sont deux exercices bien distincts. Dans un commentaire compos\u00e9, tu vas <strong>analyser un texte<\/strong>. Dans la dissertation, tu vas <strong>argumenter autour d\u2019une question<\/strong> en t\u2019appuyant sur un texte ou plusieurs textes. Tu fais moins le malin, maintenant !<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n              <\/section>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"commentaire-compose-ou-explication-lineaire-quelle-difference\">Commentaire compos\u00e9 ou explication lin\u00e9aire : quelle diff\u00e9rence ?<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>Les deux exercices analysent un texte, mais pas de la m\u00eame fa\u00e7on. Le commentaire compos\u00e9 regroupe tes remarques par th\u00e8mes. L\u2019explication lin\u00e9aire suit le texte du d\u00e9but \u00e0 la fin, mouvement par mouvement : c\u2019est l\u2019exercice de l\u2019oral du bac de fran\u00e7ais.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-table\"><table><thead><tr><th><\/th><th>Commentaire compos\u00e9<\/th><th>Explication lin\u00e9aire<\/th><\/tr><\/thead><tbody><tr><td>O\u00f9 ?<\/td><td>\u00c0 l\u2019\u00e9crit du bac<\/td><td>\u00c0 l\u2019oral du bac<\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Organisation<\/td><td>Plan th\u00e9matique en 2 ou 3 parties<\/td><td>Le texte dans l\u2019ordre, mouvement par mouvement<\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Point de d\u00e9part<\/td><td>Une probl\u00e9matique<\/td><td>Un projet de lecture<\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Pi\u00e8ge \u00e0 \u00e9viter<\/td><td>Suivre l\u2019ordre du texte<\/td><td>Paraphraser ligne \u00e0 ligne<\/td><\/tr><\/tbody><\/table><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p>Dans un commentaire compos\u00e9, ton plan ne doit donc <strong>jamais suivre le d\u00e9roul\u00e9 chronologique du texte<\/strong>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"comment-faire-un-commentaire-compose-la-methode-etape-par-etape\">Comment faire un commentaire compos\u00e9 : la m\u00e9thode \u00e9tape par \u00e9tape<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>Tu as 4 heures. Le plus gros pi\u00e8ge, c\u2019est de mal g\u00e9rer ton temps et de ne pas finir ta copie. Voici un rep\u00e8re indicatif : <strong>environ 2 h 15 de pr\u00e9paration au brouillon, puis 1 h 45 de r\u00e9daction<\/strong>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-table\"><table><thead><tr><th>\u00c9tape<\/th><th>Temps conseill\u00e9<\/th><\/tr><\/thead><tbody><tr><td>1. Lire et relire le texte<\/td><td>15 min<\/td><\/tr><tr><td>2. Analyser le texte au brouillon<\/td><td>1 h 15<\/td><\/tr><tr><td>3. Trouver la probl\u00e9matique et construire le plan<\/td><td>30 min<\/td><\/tr><tr><td>4. R\u00e9diger l\u2019introduction et la conclusion au brouillon<\/td><td>15 min<\/td><\/tr><tr><td>5. R\u00e9diger au propre et se relire<\/td><td>1 h 45<\/td><\/tr><\/tbody><\/table><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"etape-1-lire-et-relire-le-texte\">\u00c9tape 1 : lire et relire le texte<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Fais une premi\u00e8re lecture pour comprendre de quoi parle le texte et ce que tu ressens. Rep\u00e8re le genre, l\u2019\u00e9poque, l\u2019auteur et le courant litt\u00e9raire : ces informations nourriront ton introduction. Puis relis le texte crayon en main.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"etape-2-analyser-le-texte-au-brouillon\">\u00c9tape 2 : analyser le texte au brouillon<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>C\u2019est l\u2019\u00e9tape la plus importante. Concentre-toi sur deux choses \u00e0 la fois : <strong>le fond et la forme<\/strong>. Pour chaque id\u00e9e du texte, cherche le proc\u00e9d\u00e9 qui la met en valeur : une figure de style, un champ lexical, le rythme d\u2019un vers, le choix des pronoms ou des temps verbaux.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Note tout dans un tableau \u00e0 deux colonnes : \u00e0 gauche la citation et le proc\u00e9d\u00e9, \u00e0 droite l\u2019effet produit. Tu trouveras plus bas un tableau des proc\u00e9d\u00e9s \u00e0 rep\u00e9rer.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"etape-3-trouver-la-problematique-et-construire-le-plan\">\u00c9tape 3 : trouver la probl\u00e9matique et construire le plan<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Regroupe tes remarques par th\u00e8mes : chaque th\u00e8me deviendra une partie. Cherche ensuite la question qui relie ces th\u00e8mes : c\u2019est ta <strong>probl\u00e9matique<\/strong>. Elle doit porter sur ce que le texte a de particulier, et pas seulement sur son sujet.<\/p>\n\n\n<section class=\"you-know\">\n                <div class=\"you-know__title\"><p>Un exemple<\/p>\n<\/div>\n                        <div class=\"you-know__text\">\n            <p><em>Dans<a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/les-fleurs-du-mal-de-baudelaire\/\"> les Fleurs du mal de Baudelaire<\/a>, il y a souvent la volont\u00e9 de transformer le laid pour en faire du beau. Celui-ci disait d\u2019ailleurs : \u00ab Tu m\u2019as donn\u00e9 ta boue et j\u2019en ai fait de l\u2019or \u00bb. Tu peux donc faire une probl\u00e9matique de type : \u00ab Dans ce po\u00e8me, quels sont les proc\u00e9d\u00e9s employ\u00e9s par Baudelaire pour sublimer la laideur et en faire une oeuvre po\u00e9tique\u00a0 ? \u00bb<\/em><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n              <\/section>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"etape-4-preparer-lintroduction-et-la-conclusion\">\u00c9tape 4 : pr\u00e9parer l\u2019introduction et la conclusion<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>R\u00e9dige-les enti\u00e8rement au brouillon. Ce sont les parties que le correcteur lit avec le plus d\u2019attention, et tu n\u2019auras pas \u00e0 les improviser en fin d\u2019\u00e9preuve.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"etape-5-rediger-et-se-relire\">\u00c9tape 5 : r\u00e9diger et se relire<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>R\u00e9dige directement au propre ton d\u00e9veloppement \u00e0 partir du plan d\u00e9taill\u00e9. Garde 10 minutes \u00e0 la fin pour te relire et chasser les fautes.<\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter size-large\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/media.giphy.com\/media\/114RdYSvd1GuvC\/giphy.gif\" alt=\"\"\/><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n\n<section class=\"push \">\n        <div >\n            \n                                                <div class=\"push__container  qcd\" data-target=\"_self\" data-qcd=\"aHR0cHM6Ly9zaGVycGFzLmNvbS9mdW5uZWwtc3R1ZGVudC1xdWFsaWZpY2F0aW9u\" data-banner=\"2\" data-name=\"CMP1 Fran\u00e7ais\" style=\"background-color: #F3FBF7\" >\n                                                                        <div class=\"push__teachers\">\n    <div class=\"d-flex justify-content-center d-md-none\">\n        <img decoding=\"async\" class=\"push__logo\" src=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/logo.svg\" alt=\"Logo Sherpas\">\n    <\/div>\n    <div class=\"swiper\">\n        <div class=\"swiper-wrapper\">\n     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l\u2019introduction d\u2019un commentaire compos\u00e9<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>L\u2019introduction suit le <strong>principe de l\u2019entonnoir<\/strong> : tu pars d\u2019une id\u00e9e g\u00e9n\u00e9rale, puis tu resserres ton propos sur le texte. Elle tient en un seul paragraphe et comporte cinq \u00e9l\u00e9ments :<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li><strong>L\u2019accroche<\/strong> : une id\u00e9e g\u00e9n\u00e9rale sur le th\u00e8me, le mouvement litt\u00e9raire ou l\u2019auteur, pour attirer l\u2019attention du correcteur.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>La pr\u00e9sentation du texte<\/strong> : auteur, titre, date si tu la connais, genre.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>La situation du passage<\/strong> : \u00e0 quel moment de l\u2019histoire il intervient (roman, pi\u00e8ce) ou dans quelle partie du recueil (po\u00e8me).<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>La probl\u00e9matique<\/strong>, formul\u00e9e en une question.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>L\u2019annonce du plan<\/strong>.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"exemple-dintroduction-redigee\">Exemple d\u2019introduction r\u00e9dig\u00e9e<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Voici une introduction mod\u00e8le sur l\u2019ode de Ronsard \u00ab Mignonne, allons voir si la rose \u00bb, que tu retrouveras dans l\u2019exemple corrig\u00e9 plus bas :<\/p>\n\n\n<section class=\"you-know\">\n                <div class=\"you-know__title\"><p>Introduction r\u00e9dig\u00e9e<\/p>\n<\/div>\n                        <div class=\"you-know__text\">\n            <p>Au XVIe si\u00e8cle, les po\u00e8tes de la Pl\u00e9iade veulent renouveler la po\u00e9sie fran\u00e7aise en s\u2019inspirant des auteurs de l\u2019Antiquit\u00e9. Pierre de Ronsard, chef de file de ce mouvement, consacre une grande partie de son \u0153uvre \u00e0 l\u2019amour et \u00e0 la fuite du temps. Dans l\u2019ode \u00ab Mignonne, allons voir si la rose \u00bb, adress\u00e9e \u00e0 Cassandre, le po\u00e8te invite une jeune femme \u00e0 contempler une rose qui s\u2019est fan\u00e9e en une seule journ\u00e9e. Derri\u00e8re cette promenade galante se cache une r\u00e9flexion sur la bri\u00e8vet\u00e9 de la beaut\u00e9. <strong>Comment Ronsard transforme-t-il une simple invitation amoureuse en le\u00e7on sur la fuite du temps ?<\/strong> Nous verrons d\u2019abord que le po\u00e8me associe la femme \u00e0 la rose, puis qu\u2019il met en sc\u00e8ne la destruction de la beaut\u00e9 par le temps, avant de montrer qu\u2019il d\u00e9livre une le\u00e7on : profiter de sa jeunesse.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n              <\/section>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"construire-le-plan-du-developpement\">Construire le plan du d\u00e9veloppement<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>Le d\u00e9veloppement pr\u00e9sente tes analyses, regroup\u00e9es par th\u00e8mes. Il compte deux ou trois parties, chacune divis\u00e9e en deux ou trois sous-parties. Quelques r\u00e8gles \u00e0 respecter :<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li><strong>pas de plan lin\u00e9aire<\/strong> : tes parties ne suivent pas l\u2019ordre du texte ;<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>pas de titres<\/strong> : chaque partie commence par une phrase qui annonce son id\u00e9e ;<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>des transitions<\/strong> : une ou deux phrases font le lien entre deux parties ;<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>une citation pour chaque analyse<\/strong> : tu cites le texte (ou les vers) \u00e0 chaque proc\u00e9d\u00e9 que tu commentes.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"le-texte-de-lexemple\">Le texte de l\u2019exemple<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p><em>Mignonne, allons voir si la rose<br>Qui ce matin avoit desclose<br>Sa robe de pourpre au Soleil,<br>A point perdu ceste vespr\u00e9e<br>Les plis de sa robe pourpr\u00e9e,<br>Et son teint au vostre pareil.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>Las ! voyez comme en peu d\u2019espace,<br>Mignonne, elle a dessus la place<br>Las ! las ses beautez laiss\u00e9 cheoir !<br>\u00d4 vrayment marastre Nature,<br>Puis qu\u2019une telle fleur ne dure<br>Que du matin jusques au soir !<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>Donc, si vous me croyez, mignonne,<br>Tandis que vostre \u00e2ge fleuronne<br>En sa plus verte nouveaut\u00e9,<br>Cueillez, cueillez vostre jeunesse :<br>Comme \u00e0 ceste fleur la vieillesse<br>Fera ternir vostre beaut\u00e9.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Pierre de Ronsard, \u00ab \u00c0 Cassandre \u00bb, <em>Odes<\/em>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"exemple-de-plan-detaille\">Exemple de plan d\u00e9taill\u00e9<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Probl\u00e9matique<\/strong> : comment Ronsard transforme-t-il une simple invitation amoureuse en le\u00e7on sur la fuite du temps ?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li><strong>Une invitation galante qui unit la femme et la rose<\/strong>\n<ol class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>Une promenade propos\u00e9e \u00e0 la \u00ab Mignonne \u00bb : l\u2019imp\u00e9ratif \u00ab allons voir \u00bb, l\u2019adresse r\u00e9p\u00e9t\u00e9e \u00e0 la jeune femme.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Une rose d\u00e9crite comme une femme : la \u00ab robe de pourpre \u00bb, le \u00ab teint au vostre pareil \u00bb, la paronomase entre \u00ab rose \u00bb et \u00ab robe \u00bb.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Le spectacle d\u2019une beaut\u00e9 d\u00e9truite par le temps<\/strong>\n<ol class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>Une journ\u00e9e qui r\u00e9sume une vie : l\u2019opposition entre \u00ab ce matin \u00bb et \u00ab ceste vespr\u00e9e \u00bb (le soir).<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Une plainte contre la Nature : les interjections \u00ab Las ! \u00bb, l\u2019apostrophe \u00ab \u00d4 vrayment marastre Nature \u00bb.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Une le\u00e7on : profiter de sa jeunesse<\/strong>\n<ol class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>Le passage au conseil : le connecteur \u00ab Donc \u00bb et l\u2019imp\u00e9ratif r\u00e9p\u00e9t\u00e9 \u00ab Cueillez, cueillez \u00bb.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Un th\u00e8me h\u00e9rit\u00e9 de l\u2019Antiquit\u00e9, le <em>carpe diem<\/em>, mis au service de la s\u00e9duction.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"exemple-de-commentaire-compose-corrige\">Exemple de commentaire compos\u00e9 corrig\u00e9<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>Tu as l\u2019introduction plus haut. Voici maintenant une sous-partie enti\u00e8rement r\u00e9dig\u00e9e (la partie I, sous-partie 2), la transition vers la partie II, puis la conclusion.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"une-sous-partie-redigee\">Une sous-partie r\u00e9dig\u00e9e<\/h3>\n\n\n<section class=\"you-know\">\n                <div class=\"you-know__title\"><p>Partie I, sous-partie 2<\/p>\n<\/div>\n                        <div class=\"you-know__text\">\n            <p>D\u00e8s la premi\u00e8re strophe, la rose est d\u00e9crite comme une femme. Le po\u00e8te lui pr\u00eate une \u00ab robe de pourpre \u00bb, image reprise au vers 5 avec \u00ab les plis de sa robe pourpr\u00e9e \u00bb. La paronomase entre \u00ab rose \u00bb et \u00ab robe \u00bb rapproche les deux mots par le son : la fleur devient presque une jeune femme v\u00eatue de rouge. Le dernier vers de la strophe rend ce rapprochement explicite, puisque le \u00ab teint \u00bb de la rose est \u00ab au vostre pareil \u00bb. Cette comparaison unit la fleur et Cassandre. Le participe \u00ab desclose \u00bb renforce ce lien : il d\u00e9signe l\u2019\u00e9closion de la fleur au matin, mais aussi l\u2019\u00e9panouissement de la beaut\u00e9 de la jeune femme. D\u00e8s lors, le lecteur comprend que le sort de la rose annonce celui de Cassandre.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n              <\/section>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"une-transition\">Une transition<\/h3>\n\n\n<section class=\"you-know\">\n                <div class=\"you-know__title\"><p>Transition vers la partie II<\/p>\n<\/div>\n                        <div class=\"you-know__text\">\n            <p>Pourtant, cette rose si belle au matin a perdu sa beaut\u00e9 le soir m\u00eame : l\u2019invitation galante se change en spectacle de la destruction.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n              <\/section>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"la-conclusion\">La conclusion<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>La conclusion fait deux choses : elle rappelle en quoi tes parties r\u00e9pondent \u00e0 la probl\u00e9matique, puis elle propose une <strong>ouverture<\/strong> vers une autre \u0153uvre ou une autre \u00e9poque.<\/p>\n\n\n<section class=\"you-know\">\n                <div class=\"you-know__title\"><p>Conclusion r\u00e9dig\u00e9e<\/p>\n<\/div>\n                        <div class=\"you-know__text\">\n            <p>Sous les apparences d\u2019une promenade galante, l\u2019ode de Ronsard d\u00e9livre une v\u00e9ritable le\u00e7on. En associant la jeune femme \u00e0 la rose, le po\u00e8te montre que la beaut\u00e9 de Cassandre est aussi fragile que celle d\u2019une fleur fan\u00e9e en une seule journ\u00e9e. Cette menace justifie le conseil final : profiter de sa jeunesse avant que la vieillesse ne la ternisse. Ronsard reprend ainsi le <em>carpe diem<\/em> des po\u00e8tes antiques pour servir un but tr\u00e8s concret : s\u00e9duire. Ce th\u00e8me traverse les si\u00e8cles : Raymond Queneau le reprend avec humour en 1948 dans \u00ab Si tu t\u2019imagines \u00bb.<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n              <\/section>\n\n\n<section class=\"read-also\">\n    <p class=\"read-also__title\">\u00c0 lire aussi<\/p>\n            <div class=\"read-also__list\">\n            <p>Et pour une analyse compl\u00e8te, tu peux aller lire notre fiche de lecture sur <a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/mignonne-allons-voir-si-la-rose\/\">Mignonne, Allons voir si la rose<\/a> \ud83c\udf3a<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/section>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter size-large\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/media.giphy.com\/media\/56ikf9jD4ZK6s\/giphy.gif\" alt=\"\"\/><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n\n<section class=\"push \">\n        <div >\n            \n                                                <div class=\"push__container  qcd\" data-target=\"_self\" 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class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Noemie2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">No\u00e9mie<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">M2 en droit \u00e0 Assas<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">19\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                    <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/div>\n                                                    <div class=\"push__content\">\n                                                            <div  class=\"d-none d-md-block\" >\n                                    <img decoding=\"async\" class=\"push__logo\" src=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/logo.svg\"\n                                        alt=\"Logo Sherpas\">\n                                <\/div>\n                                                                                        <div class=\"push__title\"><p>Tu veux <span style=\"color: #50b47c;\">cartonner au bac <\/span>? \u2728<\/p>\n<\/div>\n                                                                                        <div class=\"push__text\"><p>Nos profs sont l\u00e0 pour t\u2019aider \u00e0 progresser !<\/p>\n<\/div>\n                                                        <div class=\"push__promo-button   \">\n                                                                                                    <div\n                                        class=\"btn btn-primary\"\n                                        style=\"color: ; border-color: ; background-color: \"\n\n                                    >\n                                        JE PRENDS UN COURS OFFERT !\n                                    <\/div>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                    <\/div>\n                                    <\/div>\n                                    <\/div>\n    <\/section>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"les-procedes-a-reperer-dans-un-texte\">Les proc\u00e9d\u00e9s \u00e0 rep\u00e9rer dans un texte<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>Pour chaque proc\u00e9d\u00e9, ne te contente pas de le nommer : <strong>explique toujours l\u2019effet qu\u2019il produit<\/strong>. Voici les principaux, avec un exemple tir\u00e9 du po\u00e8me de Ronsard.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-table\"><table><thead><tr><th>Proc\u00e9d\u00e9<\/th><th>Ce qu\u2019il faut rep\u00e9rer<\/th><th>Exemple chez Ronsard<\/th><th>Effet \u00e0 commenter<\/th><\/tr><\/thead><tbody><tr><td>Champ lexical<\/td><td>Des mots qui renvoient au m\u00eame th\u00e8me<\/td><td>La beaut\u00e9 : \u00ab robe de pourpre \u00bb, \u00ab teint \u00bb, \u00ab beautez \u00bb<\/td><td>Le th\u00e8me central du texte<\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Comparaison, m\u00e9taphore<\/td><td>Un rapprochement entre deux \u00e9l\u00e9ments<\/td><td>La rose au \u00ab teint au vostre pareil \u00bb<\/td><td>Le lien entre la fleur et la femme<\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Personnification<\/td><td>Un objet ou une id\u00e9e trait\u00e9s comme une personne<\/td><td>La rose qui porte une \u00ab robe \u00bb<\/td><td>La fleur devient un double de Cassandre<\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Antith\u00e8se<\/td><td>Deux id\u00e9es oppos\u00e9es rapproch\u00e9es<\/td><td>\u00ab du matin jusques au soir \u00bb<\/td><td>La bri\u00e8vet\u00e9 de la beaut\u00e9<\/td><\/tr><tr><td>R\u00e9p\u00e9tition<\/td><td>Un mot repris pour insister<\/td><td>\u00ab Las ! las \u00bb, \u00ab Cueillez, cueillez \u00bb<\/td><td>L\u2019\u00e9motion, puis l\u2019urgence du conseil<\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Modes et temps verbaux<\/td><td>Imp\u00e9ratif, pr\u00e9sent, futur<\/td><td>\u00ab Cueillez \u00bb, \u00ab fera ternir \u00bb<\/td><td>L\u2019ordre donn\u00e9 et la menace \u00e0 venir<\/td><\/tr><tr><td>\u00c9nonciation<\/td><td>Qui parle, \u00e0 qui, avec quels pronoms<\/td><td>\u00ab vous \u00bb, \u00ab Mignonne \u00bb<\/td><td>Un po\u00e8me adress\u00e9, qui cherche \u00e0 convaincre<\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Ponctuation, rythme<\/td><td>Exclamations, coupes, longueur des vers<\/td><td>\u00ab Las ! voyez comme en peu d\u2019espace \u00bb<\/td><td>La plainte, l\u2019\u00e9motion du po\u00e8te<\/td><\/tr><\/tbody><\/table><\/figure>\n\n\n<section class=\"read-also\">\n    <p class=\"read-also__title\">\u00c0 lire aussi<\/p>\n            <div class=\"read-also__list\">\n            <p>Plus d&rsquo;infos sur les <a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/figure-de-style-bac-francais\/\">figures de style<\/a> juste ici \ud83d\udc48<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/section>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"la-mise-en-forme-et-les-erreurs-a-eviter\">La mise en forme et les erreurs \u00e0 \u00e9viter<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"soigner-la-presentation\">Soigner la pr\u00e9sentation<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Ta copie doit \u00eatre lisible et respecter quelques r\u00e8gles :<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>sauter une ligne entre l\u2019introduction et le d\u00e9veloppement, entre chaque partie, et avant la conclusion ;<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>faire un alin\u00e9a \u00e0 chaque nouveau paragraphe ;<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u00e9crire lisiblement, sans ratures.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>Relis-toi plusieurs fois pour chasser les fautes. Si l\u2019orthographe est ton point faible, revois r\u00e9guli\u00e8rement tes r\u00e8gles de grammaire et de conjugaison.<\/p>\n\n\n<section class=\"read-also\">\n    <p class=\"read-also__title\">\u00c0 lire aussi<\/p>\n            <div class=\"read-also__list\">\n            <p>On t&rsquo;explique comment <a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/les-fautes-de-francais-courantes\/\">bannir les fautes de fran\u00e7ais les plus courantes<\/a> \u2728<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/section>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"les-erreurs-a-ne-pas-commettre\">Les erreurs \u00e0 ne pas commettre<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li><strong>Paraphraser<\/strong> : redire le texte avec tes mots au lieu de l\u2019analyser.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>S\u00e9parer le fond et la forme<\/strong> : chaque proc\u00e9d\u00e9 doit servir une id\u00e9e.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Suivre l\u2019ordre du texte<\/strong> : c\u2019est le plan de l\u2019explication lin\u00e9aire, pas du commentaire.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\u00c9crire les titres des parties<\/strong> : on les annonce par une phrase.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Analyser sans citer<\/strong> : chaque remarque s\u2019appuie sur une citation, avec les vers pour un po\u00e8me.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Oublier la probl\u00e9matique en route<\/strong> : chaque partie doit y r\u00e9pondre.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n<section class=\"push \">\n        <div >\n            \n                                                <div class=\"push__container  qcd\" data-target=\"_self\" data-qcd=\"aHR0cHM6Ly9zaGVycGFzLmNvbS9mdW5uZWwtc3R1ZGVudC1xdWFsaWZpY2F0aW9u\" data-banner=\"2\" data-name=\"CPM\u00e9thodo\" style=\"background-color: #F3FBF7\" >\n                                                                        <div class=\"push__teachers\">\n    <div class=\"d-flex justify-content-center d-md-none\">\n        <img decoding=\"async\" class=\"push__logo\" src=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/logo.svg\" alt=\"Logo Sherpas\">\n    <\/div>\n    <div class=\"swiper\">\n        <div class=\"swiper-wrapper\">\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Jade2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Jade<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">Sciences Po Paris<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">21\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/David2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">David<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">EDHEC<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">25\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Noemie2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">No\u00e9mie<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">M2 en droit \u00e0 Assas<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">19\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Jeanne2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Jeanne<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">Aix-Marseille Universit\u00e9<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">17\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Louise2x.png);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Louise<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">Mines ParisTech<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">24\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Emma2x.png);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Emma<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">Dauphine<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">15\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Pierre2x.png);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Pierre<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">ESSEC<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">16\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Victor2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Victor<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">ESCP<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">25\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                    <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/div>\n                                                    <div class=\"push__content\">\n                                                            <div  class=\"d-none d-md-block\" >\n                                    <img decoding=\"async\" class=\"push__logo\" src=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/logo.svg\"\n                                        alt=\"Logo Sherpas\">\n                                <\/div>\n                                                                                        <div class=\"push__title\"><p>Besoin d\u2019aide en m\u00e9thodo ?<\/p>\n<\/div>\n                                                                                        <div class=\"push__text\"><p>Trouve un prof expert en m\u00e9thodologie ! \u2728<\/p>\n<\/div>\n                                                        <div class=\"push__promo-button   \">\n                                                                                                    <div\n                                        class=\"btn btn-primary\"\n                                        style=\"color: ; border-color: ; background-color: \"\n\n                                    >\n                                        JE PRENDS UN COURS OFFERT !\n                                    <\/div>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                    <\/div>\n                                    <\/div>\n                                    <\/div>\n    <\/section>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"faq-sur-le-commentaire-compose\">FAQ sur le commentaire compos\u00e9<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"comment-rediger-un-commentaire-compose\">Comment r\u00e9diger un commentaire compos\u00e9 ?<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Analyse d\u2019abord le texte au brouillon, en reliant chaque proc\u00e9d\u00e9 \u00e0 une id\u00e9e. Regroupe ensuite tes remarques en th\u00e8mes, trouve une probl\u00e9matique et construis un plan en deux ou trois parties. R\u00e9dige enfin l\u2019introduction, le d\u00e9veloppement et la conclusion.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"quest-ce-quun-sujet-de-commentaire-compose\">Qu\u2019est-ce qu\u2019un sujet de commentaire compos\u00e9 ?<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>C\u2019est un texte litt\u00e9raire, en prose ou en vers, que tu d\u00e9couvres le jour de l\u2019\u00e9preuve. Au bac g\u00e9n\u00e9ral, il est li\u00e9 \u00e0 un objet d\u2019\u00e9tude du programme de premi\u00e8re, mais il n\u2019est pas tir\u00e9 d\u2019une des \u0153uvres au programme. En voie technologique, le sujet est formul\u00e9 pour te guider.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"combien-de-parties-faut-il-dans-un-commentaire-compose\">Combien de parties faut-il dans un commentaire compos\u00e9 ?<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Deux ou trois parties, chacune divis\u00e9e en deux ou trois sous-parties. L\u2019essentiel est que chaque partie r\u00e9ponde \u00e0 la probl\u00e9matique.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"combien-de-temps-dure-lepreuve\">Combien de temps dure l\u2019\u00e9preuve ?<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>L\u2019\u00e9preuve \u00e9crite de fran\u00e7ais dure 4 heures. Compte environ 2 h 15 pour le brouillon et 1 h 45 pour la r\u00e9daction.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"quelle-est-la-difference-avec-la-dissertation\">Quelle est la diff\u00e9rence avec la dissertation ?<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Le commentaire analyse un texte pr\u00e9cis que tu as sous les yeux. 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