{"id":188938,"date":"2025-09-17T17:13:00","date_gmt":"2025-09-17T15:13:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/methode-expression-ecrite-anglais-bac\/"},"modified":"2026-10-12T17:52:53","modified_gmt":"2026-10-12T15:52:53","slug":"methode-expression-ecrite-anglais-bac","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/methode-expression-ecrite-anglais-bac\/","title":{"rendered":"[Bac d\u2019anglais] La m\u00e9thode ultime pour r\u00e9ussir l\u2019expression \u00e9crite [+ exemple] \ud83c\uddec\ud83c\udde7"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>L\u2019<strong>expression \u00e9crite en anglais a de quoi impressionner&#8230;<\/strong> 300 mots +\/- 10%&#8230; de quoi avoir le temps de faire d\u2019impardonnables fautes de grammaire et de vocabulaire ! Pourtant, avec la bonne pr\u00e9paration, il est tout \u00e0 fait possible de d\u00e9crocher une super note, en contr\u00f4le continu comme en sp\u00e9 LLCER (o\u00f9 tu devras r\u00e9diger une synth\u00e8se d\u2019environ 500 mots).<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Paroles d\u2019un Sherpa ayant obtenu 19 en <em>English<\/em> au baccalaur\u00e9at ! \ud83c\uddec\ud83c\udde7\ud83d\udc4d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Tu aimerais que tes expressions \u00e9crites en anglais te paraissent plus accessibles ? Un&nbsp;<strong><a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/cours\/anglais\">cours de soutien en anglais<\/a><\/strong>&nbsp;peut transformer cette envie en r\u00e9alit\u00e9 !<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>En attendant, <strong>bonne lecture<\/strong> ! \ud83d\udcda<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"a-retenir\">\u00c0 retenir<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>La r\u00e9ussite de l&rsquo;<strong>expression \u00e9crite LLCER en anglais au bac<\/strong> vient d&rsquo;une m\u00e9thode claire : analyse du sujet, plan d\u00e9taill\u00e9 au brouillon, puis r\u00e9daction structur\u00e9e.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>L&rsquo;\u00e9preuve propose diff\u00e9rents formats comme l&rsquo;essai, le dialogue ou la lettre. Chaque exercice poss\u00e8de des r\u00e8gles de pr\u00e9sentation sp\u00e9cifiques.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Un bon niveau de langue, sans fautes, est indispensable. Les arguments s&rsquo;accompagnent toujours d&rsquo;exemples concrets pour convaincre.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"modalites-de-lepreuve\">Modalit\u00e9s de l\u2019\u00e9preuve \ud83e\uddd0<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"quel-est-le-deroulement-de-lepreuve\">Quel est le d\u00e9roulement de l\u2019\u00e9preuve? \ud83c\udfc2<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>En sp\u00e9 LLCER, l\u2019\u00e9preuve \u00e9crite dure 3h30 : la synth\u00e8se en anglais d\u2019un dossier (environ 500 mots) est not\u00e9e sur 16 points, et la traduction ou transposition en fran\u00e7ais sur 4 points. En tronc commun (LVA\/LVB), l\u2019anglais est \u00e9valu\u00e9 en contr\u00f4le continu, et tu re\u00e7ois une attestation de niveau.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"attentes-des-correcteurs\">Attentes des correcteurs \ud83e\udd13<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Si le fond (ce que tu dis) est certes important pour ton correcteur, la richesse de ton vocabulaire et le respect des r\u00e8gles grammaticales sont indispensables si tu veux d\u00e9crocher une bonne note !<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"les-differents-formats-de-lexpression-ecrite\">Les diff\u00e9rents formats de l\u2019expression \u00e9crite \ud83d\udcd6<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>En classe et dans tes \u00e9valuations de contr\u00f4le continu, on peut te proposer diff\u00e9rents types d\u2019exercices :<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li><strong>\u00c9crire un essai<\/strong> : le plus classique, tu r\u00e9ponds \u00e0 une question en suivant une argumentation structur\u00e9e. Bien souvent, tu vas commencer par exprimer diff\u00e9rents points avant de prendre position. Exemple : <em>Do you think technical progress necessarily implies forgetting the past?<\/em><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\u00c9crire un commentaire<\/strong> : on te demande d\u2019argumenter \u00e0 partir d\u2019une citation ou d\u2019un passage du texte. <em>Example : Document A: \u201cThe danger is that we have come to admire celebrities more than real heroes.\u201d (line 18) To what extent do you agree with this statement? (300 words +\/- 10%)<\/em><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Un dialogue.<\/strong> Exemple <em>: Two students are discussing the pros and cons of moving back to their parents\u2019 home after they finish university. Write their conversation.<\/em><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Une lettre ou un journal intime<\/strong>.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Un article de journal<\/strong>.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>Voyons d\u00e9sormais comment s&rsquo;y prendre pour chacun de ces exercices ! \ud83d\ude80<\/p>\n\n\n<section class=\"read-also\">\n    <p class=\"read-also__title\">\u00c0 lire aussi<\/p>\n            <div class=\"read-also__list\">\n            <p>Tu veux d&rsquo;autres conseils et astuces ? C&rsquo;est juste l\u00e0 :<br data-rich-text-line-break=\"true\" \/>\u2705 <a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/comprehension-ecrite-anglais-bac\/\">La compr\u00e9hension \u00e9crite en anglais au baccalaur\u00e9at <\/a>\ud83d\udca5<\/p>\n<p>\u2705 L<a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/methode-expression-orale-anglais-bac\/\">&lsquo;expression orale en anglais au baccalaur\u00e9at<\/a>\ud83d\udc96<\/p>\n<p>\u2705 <a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/methode-expression-orale-anglais-bac\/\">La compr\u00e9hension orale en anglais au baccalaur\u00e9at<\/a>\u2728<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/section>\n\n\n<section class=\"push \">\n        <div >\n            \n                                                <div class=\"push__container  qcd\" data-target=\"_self\" data-qcd=\"aHR0cHM6Ly9zaGVycGFzLmNvbS9mdW5uZWwtc3R1ZGVudC1xdWFsaWZpY2F0aW9u\" data-banner=\"2\" data-name=\"Cours part\u2019 global #1 = CPG1\" style=\"background-color: #F3FBF7\" >\n                                    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Cela t\u2019\u00e9vitera d\u00e9j\u00e0 le malheureux hors sujet.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Profite-en aussi pour t\u2019assurer d\u2019avoir fait le bon choix de sujet : <strong>tu dois avoir assez d\u2019arguments et d\u2019\u00e9l\u00e9ments \u00e0 convoquer<\/strong> qui te viennent en t\u00eate.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"prenons-desormais-un-exemple-de-sujet-pour-lillustrer\">Prenons d\u00e9sormais un exemple de sujet pour l&rsquo;illustrer :<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p><em>To what degree do you consider that a company can succeed in reconciling the two objectives of profitability and environmentalism ?<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Quand tu as une question qui t\u2019invite \u00e0 donner ton point de vue (<em>to what degree \/ how \/ to what extent&#8230;<\/em>), tu dois \u00eatre en mesure de reformuler la question avec tes propres mots. Ne reprends jamais la question telle qu\u2019elle t\u2019est pos\u00e9e.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Ici, <strong>bien comprendre l\u2019opposition suppos\u00e9e entre les deux termes cl\u00e9s <\/strong>(<em>profitability<\/em> = rentabilit\u00e9 ; environmentalism = <em>respect de l\u2019environnement<\/em>) et <strong>reformuler le sujet avec tes propres mots est essentiel si tu veux trouver une bonne probl\u00e9matique<\/strong>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Pour rappel :<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"la-problematique-peut-etre-une-question-directe-inversion-sujet-verbe\">La probl\u00e9matique peut \u00eatre une question directe (inversion sujet-verbe) \ud83d\udc47<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>&#8211; <em>To what extent is \/ How is\u2026<\/em> (dans quelle mesure, comment ?)<br> &#8211; <em>Is\u2026 necessarily\u2026 ?<\/em> (est-ce que option A est n\u00e9cessairement option B ?)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"mais-elle-peut-aussi-etre-une-question-indirecte-pas-dinversion-du-verbe-et-du-sujet-auquel-cas\">Mais elle peut aussi \u00eatre une question indirecte (pas d\u2019inversion du verbe et du sujet auquel cas) \ud83d\udc47<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>&#8211; <em>We can wonder if\u2026 <\/em>(nous pouvons nous demander si\u2026)<br>&#8211; <em>We can wonder how\u2026 <\/em>(nous pouvons nous demander comment\u2026)<br>&#8211; <em>We can wonder to what extent\u2026<\/em> (nous pouvons nous demander dans quelle mesure\u2026)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"2-methode-essai-danglais-au-bac-ecrire-ses-idees-au-brouillon-25-min\">2) M\u00e9thode essai d\u2019anglais au bac : \u00e9crire ses id\u00e9es au brouillon (25 min) \u270d\ufe0f<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Attention, une fois ta probl\u00e9matique trouv\u00e9e, ne r\u00e9dige pas tout au brouillon.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Privil\u00e9gie un plan tr\u00e8s d\u00e9taill\u00e9 dans un tableau avec tes id\u00e9es ma\u00eetresses.<\/strong> Ton but est d\u2019avoir un fil directeur clair dans ton argumentation.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u26a0\ufe0f Attention : <strong>pense toujours \u00e0 avoir un argument accompagn\u00e9 d\u2019un exemple pour que ton propos soit percutant !<\/strong> Comme dans une conversation avec quelqu\u2019un, tu dois toujours illustrer une th\u00e9orie avec quelque chose de concret et compr\u00e9hensible par ton interlocuteur.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Reprenons notre sujet sur l\u2019environnement et la rentabilit\u00e9 : <em>To what degree do you consider that a company can succeed in reconciling the two objectives of profitability and environmentalism ?<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>La question nous rappelle que la premi\u00e8re chose \u00e0 laquelle on pense en mati\u00e8re de respect de l\u2019environnement pour les entreprises, c\u2019est le probl\u00e8me du co\u00fbt. Tu pourrais donc avoir envie de cr\u00e9er un plan en 2 parties opposant rentabilit\u00e9 et \u00e9cologie. Mais ce serait trop facile\u2026 <strong>Eh oui, l\u2019utilisation de \u201c<em>to what extent<\/em>\u201d (= dans quelle mesure) t\u2019invite \u00e0 la nuance. Tu dois <strong>donc<\/strong> te poser la question de la compatibilit\u00e9 entre ces deux objectifs que sont le respect de l\u2019environnement et la rentabilit\u00e9 d\u2019une entreprise.<\/strong> Tu vas donc devoir chercher des noms d&rsquo;entreprises qui peuvent \u00eatre rentables alors m\u00eame qu\u2019elles respectent l\u2019environnement.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>On pourrait alors partir sur un plan de ce style : <strong>on pose d\u2019abord le probl\u00e8me majeur qui est que le respect de l\u2019environnement implique un co\u00fbt suppl\u00e9mentaire pour les entreprises, ce qui a des cons\u00e9quences n\u00e9gatives sur leur comp\u00e9titivit\u00e9<\/strong> (exemple : le livre de Morgensen qui montre que les entreprises vertes doublent leurs co\u00fbts de production en moyenne).<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Ensuite, on peut venir montrer diverses solutions qui existent permettant \u00e0 la fois de rentabiliser la reconversion \u00e9cologique tout en soutenant la cause environnementale<\/strong>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u00c7a nous donnerait du coup un tableau de ce style au brouillon :<\/p>\n\n\n\n<table id=\"tablepress-110\" class=\"tablepress tablepress-id-110\">\n<thead>\n<tr class=\"row-1\">\n\t<th class=\"column-1\">Partie 1 : Respect environnement semble difficilement conciliable avec rentabilit\u00e9<\/th><th class=\"column-2\">Partie 2 : Mais en fait si c\u2019est possible<\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<\/thead>\n<tbody class=\"row-striping row-hover\">\n<tr class=\"row-2\">\n\t<td class=\"column-1\">Argument principal : Les entreprises respectant l\u2019environnement voient leur comp\u00e9titivit\u00e9 d\u00e9cliner fortement<\/td><td class=\"column-2\">Argument principal : Des solutions existent permettant de rentabiliser la reconversion \u00e9cologique ou de soutenir la cause environnementale<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr class=\"row-3\">\n\t<td class=\"column-1\">Exemple pertinent : livre Morgensen sur l\u2019explosion du co\u00fbt pour les entreprises ayant une production \u201cverte\u201d<\/td><td class=\"column-2\">Exemples pertinents : <br \/>\nMax Havelaar, Technologies vertes,<br \/>\nUsine Ford \u00e0 Rouge<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<!-- #tablepress-110 from cache -->\n\n\n<section class=\"relance\">\n        <div >\n                            <a rel=\"nofollow\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/funnel-student-qualification\">\n                    <div class=\"relance__container\"\n                        >\n                        \n                                                        <picture>\n                            <source srcset=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2023\/07\/relance-cours-particulier-7-e1719914849200.jpg\" media=\"(min-width: 999px)\">\n                            <source srcset=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2023\/07\/relance-cours-particulier-7-e1719914849200.jpg\" media=\"(max-width: 999px)\">\n                                <img decoding=\"async\"\n                                    src=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2023\/07\/relance-cours-particulier-7-e1719914849200.jpg\"\n                                    alt=\"Personne qui donne des cours particuliers\"\n                                >\n                            <\/picture>\n                                                <div class=\"relance__content\">\n                            \n                                <div class=\"relance__title\"> <p>&#8211; La r\u00e9ussite de l&rsquo;**expression \u00e9crite d&rsquo;anglais au bac** vient d&rsquo;une m\u00e9thode claire : analyse du sujet, plan d\u00e9taill\u00e9 au brouillon, puis r\u00e9daction structur\u00e9e.<br \/>\n&#8211; L&rsquo;\u00e9preuve propose diff\u00e9rents formats comme l&rsquo;essai, le dialogue ou la lettre. Chaque exercice poss\u00e8de des r\u00e8gles de pr\u00e9sentation sp\u00e9cifiques.<br \/>\n&#8211; Un bon niveau de langue, sans fautes, est indispensable. Les arguments s&rsquo;accompagnent toujours d&rsquo;exemples concrets pour convaincre. Tu veux avoir 20\/20 en anglais ? C&rsquo;est possible ! Prends rendez-vous avec un de nos profs particuliers !<\/p>\n<\/div>\n                                                        <button type=\"button\"\n                                    class=\"relance__button btn btn-white\">\n                                On t&rsquo;offre le premier cours \ud83c\udf81\n                            <\/button>\n                        <\/div>\n                    <\/div>\n                <\/a>\n                    <\/div>\n    <\/section>\n\n    \n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"3-rediger-lintroduction-10-min\">3) R\u00e9diger l\u2019introduction (10 min) \ud83d\udc27<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Bon, tu as compris comment construire des arguments qui tiennent la route. Passons au cas de l\u2019introduction, celle-ci doit suivre le carcan suivant :<br> &#8211; <strong>Introduire ton sujet<\/strong> (avec un fait int\u00e9ressant si tu as \u00e7a dans ta besace).<br> &#8211; <strong>Redonner la probl\u00e9matique<\/strong> (c.-\u00e0-d. la question pos\u00e9e par le sujet) en reformulant la question.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Prenons ici deux illustrations de notre propos :<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Si on reprend notre sujet sur l\u2019environnement un peu plus haut, voil\u00e0 un exemple d\u2019introduction fonctionnant :<\/strong><br><em>To maintain itself, a company must balance its budget. For the sake of the environment, firms have to bear extra expenses, which makes them less competitive; yet, those which go green can cut running costs, or cash in the value added to their products.<\/em> <strong>(= introduction du sujet)<\/strong><em> The question is, how can companies be profitable and environmentally friendly at the same time ? <\/em><strong>(= probl\u00e9matique reformul\u00e9e)<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Prenons un autre sujet pour illustrer ce qu\u2019est une bonne introduction :<\/strong><br><em>Video games are often blamed for gun violence. Do you think this is fair?<br><\/em><strong>Proposition d\u2019introduction : <\/strong><em>In the wake of the Columbine (USA) shooting, the debate about the links between violent video games and gun violence was renewed because the two teenagers who committed the mass murder were fans of games <\/em><strong>(= introduction du sujet)<\/strong>.<em> Yet, how much of the blame can we put on games ? 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       <div  class=\"d-none d-md-block\" >\n                                    <img decoding=\"async\" class=\"push__logo\" src=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/logo.svg\"\n                                        alt=\"Logo Sherpas\">\n                                <\/div>\n                                                                                        <div class=\"push__title\"><p>Besoin d&rsquo;un prof particulier ? <span role=\"img\" aria-label=\"\u2728\">\u2728<\/span><!-- notionvc: 9b5ed38b-ea2e-4d3c-a3bb-f0091c2eedd2 --><\/p>\n<\/div>\n                                                                                        <div class=\"push__text\"><p>Nos profs sont l\u00e0 pour t&rsquo;aider \u00e0 progresser !<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><!-- notionvc: 20490bdd-6579-484b-9d99-0ff0bc1aa8e7 --><\/p>\n<\/div>\n                                                        <div class=\"push__promo-button   \">\n                                                                                                    <div\n                                        class=\"btn btn-primary\"\n                                        style=\"color: ; border-color: ; background-color: \"\n\n                                    >\n                                        JE PRENDS UN COURS OFFERT !\n                                    <\/div>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                    <\/div>\n                                    <\/div>\n                                    <\/div>\n    <\/section>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"4-methode-essai-anglais-au-bac-rediger-le-developpement-en-2-ou-3-parties-30-min\">4) M\u00e9thode essai anglais au bac : r\u00e9diger le d\u00e9veloppement en 2 ou 3 parties (30 min) \ud83c\udfac<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>L\u2019avantage d\u2019avoir fait un bon brouillon, c\u2019est que maintenant, tes arguments coulent de source et tu as un bon fond de connaissances.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Applique-toi donc \u00e0 rendre une langue claire, propre et sans fautes de grammaire\/vocabulaire\/syntaxe \u00e9normes !<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter size-large\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/media.giphy.com\/media\/igmZ0qeaPiqVY2gFAR\/giphy.gif\" alt=\"personne qui dit g\u00e9nial !\"\/><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\"><em>Si c\u2019est le cas, tu seras alors dans de tr\u00e8s bonnes dispositions pour choper la note maximale \ud83d\udcaa<\/em><\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"5-rediger-la-conclusion-5-min\">5) R\u00e9diger la conclusion (5 min) \ud83e\udd45<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Peaufine ta conclusion en prenant position sur ton sujet. Essaye de laisser le correcteur sur une \u201cbonne\u201d derni\u00e8re impression en \u00e9vitant d\u2019\u00e9normes fautes d\u2019inattention.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"6-relecture-15-min\">6) Relecture (15 min) \ud83e\uddd0<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Prends un bon quart d\u2019heure pour t\u2019assurer que tu n\u2019as pas fait de bourdes \u00e9normes sur le triptyque grammaire\/vocabulaire\/syntaxe.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"exemple-dessai-en-anglais-au-bac\">Exemple d\u2019essai en anglais au bac  \ud83d\ude0d<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>Voici un exemple qui marche bien en essai et un commentaire juste en dessous !<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"video-games-are-often-blamed-for-gun-violence-do-you-think-this-is-fair\">Video games are often blamed for gun violence. Do you think this is fair?<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p><em>In the wake of the Columbine (USA) shooting, the debate about the links between violent video games and gun violence was renewed because the two teenagers who committed the mass murder were fans of video games<\/em>.<em> Yet, how much of the blame can we put on games ? Are they the only thing that should be held responsible for gun violence ? <\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>As violent video games &#8211; whose rules are to kill as many people as possible &#8211; become more and more popular, parents worry and experts try to analyze their effect on teenagers\u2019 well-being. Indeed, if killing is a game, how are young kids to understand the difference between the virtual world and real life? Are they not going to want to try to see how it feels to kill someone \u201cfor real\u201d after having killed so many virtual characters? However, the number of mass murderers is extremely low compared with the number of game players, which suggests the two are not closely connected.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>Indeed, as Michael Moore explains in his documentary Bowling for Columbine, video games cannot be the only cause of gun violence since in a country like Japan, where fans of video games are quite numerous, the number of gun deaths is extremely low. Thus, the American gun problem can be explained by many different things: the easy access to guns, the gun culture inherited from the early years of American history, the gun lobbies such as the NRA, etc.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>Thus, the causes of gun violence appear to be complex and putting the blame on games seems to me to be a dangerous simplification of the issue.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-right\">274 words<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"avis-sur-cet-essai\">Avis sur cet essai \ud83d\ude44<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Comme tu peux le constater, on est bien dans les clous au niveau du nombre de mots. <strong>L\u2019introduction commence avec un fait int\u00e9ressant<\/strong> (la fusillade de Colombine) avant d\u2019encha\u00eener avec la <strong>reformulation de la probl\u00e9matique<\/strong> sous forme de deux questions qui s\u2019encha\u00eenent logiquement.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>On a ensuite la <strong>partie 1 avec un argument principal<\/strong> (avoir \u201ctu\u00e9\u201d dans les jeux ne donne-t-il pas envie de le faire en vrai ?) <strong>avant de venir le d\u00e9monter gr\u00e2ce \u00e0 l\u2019exemple<\/strong> (le nombre de meurtriers de masse est extr\u00eamement faible compar\u00e9s au nombre de joueurs de jeux vid\u00e9o). Puis on passe \u00e0 la <strong>partie 2 o\u00f9 l\u2019argument principal est que le fait de jouer aux jeux n\u2019entra\u00eene pas n\u00e9cessairement une culture de violence<\/strong> comme le montre le cas du Japon. <strong>On s&rsquo;appuie ensuite sur l\u2019exemple des \u00c9tats-Unis<\/strong> pour montrer que cela s\u2019explique s\u00fbrement par d\u2019autres facteurs plus pr\u00e9sents (culture des armes, lobbies, etc.). On finit avec une <strong>conclusion avec prise de position<\/strong> (trop simpliste d\u2019accuser le jeu vid\u00e9o sur la violence des armes \u00e0 feu).<\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter size-large\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/media.giphy.com\/media\/a5viI92PAF89q\/giphy.gif\" alt=\"batman r\u00e9fl\u00e9chit\"\/><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\"><em>Ne tergiverse pas, il faut prendre position \ud83d\udc4c<\/em><\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"methode-expression-ecrite-anglais-bac-le-cas-du-commentaire\">M\u00e9thode expression \u00e9crite anglais bac : le cas du commentaire \ud83d\udd16<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>Comme le montre cet exemple : <em>Document A: \u201cThe danger is that we have come to admire celebrities more than real heroes.\u201d (line 18) To what extent do you agree with this statement? (300 words +\/- 10%)<\/em> ; <strong>on te demande d\u2019argumenter \u00e0 partir d\u2019une citation ou d\u2019un passage du texte \u00e9tudi\u00e9.<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>En effet, l\u2019exercice est de rep\u00e9rer au sein du passage les raisons pour lesquelles nous sommes venus \u00e0 admirer les c\u00e9l\u00e9brit\u00e9s plus que les vrais h\u00e9ros. <strong>C\u2019est finalement un poil plus facile que l\u2019essai car certains des arguments sont d\u00e9j\u00e0 plus ou moins donn\u00e9s<\/strong>, mais cela te demande d\u2019avoir bien compris le texte pour ne pas faire fausse route.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>En revanche, une fois bien cern\u00e9 le sujet, n\u2019h\u00e9site pas \u00e0 <strong>\u00eatre un peu original<\/strong> pour sortir des sentiers battus en proposant des illustrations pertinentes et diff\u00e9rentes de tes camarades.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>En ce qui concerne la m\u00e9thodologie, c\u2019est ensuite grosso modo la m\u00eame chose que pour l\u2019essai.<\/p>\n\n\n<section class=\"push \">\n        <div >\n            \n                                                <div class=\"push__container  qcd\" data-target=\"_self\" data-qcd=\"aHR0cHM6Ly9zaGVycGFzLmNvbS9mdW5uZWwtc3R1ZGVudC1xdWFsaWZpY2F0aW9u\" data-banner=\"2\" data-name=\"Cours part\u2019 global #3 = CPG3\" style=\"background-color: #F3FBF7\" >\n                                                                        <div class=\"push__teachers\">\n    <div class=\"d-flex justify-content-center d-md-none\">\n        <img decoding=\"async\" class=\"push__logo\" src=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/logo.svg\" alt=\"Logo Sherpas\">\n    <\/div>\n    <div class=\"swiper\">\n        <div class=\"swiper-wrapper\">\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Martin2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Martin<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">HEC Paris<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                              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          <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">23\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Jade2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Jade<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">Sciences Po Paris<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            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url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Bastien2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Bastien<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">Polytechnique<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n        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                                             <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">26\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Emilie2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Emilie<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">Sciences Po Lyon<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                   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xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">19\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Hugo2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Hugo<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">Insa Lyon<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                  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                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">16\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Alma2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Alma<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">ENS Paris-Saclay<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            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                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">25\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Jeanne2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Jeanne<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">Aix-Marseille Universit\u00e9<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                  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of moving back to their parents\u2019 home after they finish university. Write their conversation.<\/em><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Bon, rien de bien compliqu\u00e9, mais il faut prendre en compte les sp\u00e9cificit\u00e9s du dialogue anglais :<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>Tu ne dois pas utiliser de tirets, mais des <strong>guillemets<\/strong>.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Utilise si possible des <strong>verbes et des expressions vari\u00e9s<\/strong> pour montrer la richesse de ta langue.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Attention \u00e0 <strong>bien utiliser la forme affirmative<\/strong> (<em>he said, he answered<\/em>), et non pas l\u2019inversion du sujet et du verbe comme en fran\u00e7ais (dit-il\u2026)<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Adapte bien le niveau de la langue<\/strong> (familier VS courant VS soutenu) et le <strong>style d\u2019\u00e9criture<\/strong> selon les types d\u2019interlocuteurs (enfant, ado, \u00e9tudiant, adulte) et les relations qu\u2019ils entretiennent (amis, ado\/parent, prof\/\u00e9l\u00e8ve\u2026)<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Tu peux <strong>utiliser \u00e0 foison les marques propres au dialogue<\/strong> comme : les <strong>pauses<\/strong> (er\u2026, and\u2026), les <strong>tics verbaux<\/strong> (you know\u2026) ou encore les <strong>interjections<\/strong> (hey!&#8230;)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"methodologie-dexpression-ecrite-le-cas-de-la-lettre\">M\u00e9thodologie d&rsquo;expression \u00e9crite : le cas de la lettre \ud83d\udcee<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>Pour cet exercice, il faut respecter certains \u00e9l\u00e9ments caract\u00e9ristiques :<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li><strong>Date et lieu<\/strong> en haut \u00e0 droite.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Lorsque tu \u00e9cris, tu t\u2019adresses \u00e0 quelqu\u2019un : il faut donc <strong>bien parler \u00e0 ton destinataire en lui posant des questions<\/strong>, etc.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>N\u2019oublie pas les <strong>coordonn\u00e9es de ton destinataire<\/strong>.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Et ne passe pas \u00e0 c\u00f4t\u00e9 de la <strong>petite formule de politesse en bas <\/strong>selon ton interlocuteur (<em>Sincerely, Best regards, Love\u2026<\/em>)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"methode-expression-ecrite-anglais-bac-le-cas-de-larticle-de-journal\">M\u00e9thode expression \u00e9crite anglais bac : le cas de l\u2019article de journal \ud83d\udcf0<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>Pense pour commencer au format classique de l\u2019article de journal :<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>Nom du <strong>journal<\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Nom du <strong>journaliste<\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Date de publication<\/strong> de l\u2019article<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>Et n\u2019oublie pas les r\u00e8gles sp\u00e9cifiques du style journalistique :<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li><strong>Titre de l\u2019article accrocheur<\/strong> pour attirer l\u2019attention du lecteur (fait marquant, jeu de mots, calembour, mots s\u00e9lectionn\u00e9s avec soin\u2026)<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>L\u2019information est organis\u00e9e en paragraphes<\/strong> allant de l\u2019info la plus g\u00e9n\u00e9raliste \u00e0 l\u2019info la plus d\u00e9taill\u00e9e possible<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n<section class=\"video\">\n    <div class=\"container\">\n        <div class=\"row justify-content-center\">\n            <div class=\"col-12 col-lg-10\">\n                <div class=\"embed-responsive embed-responsive-16by9\">\n                <iframe src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/BiPqFPR2Wcc\"\n                        title=\"YouTube video player\" frameborder=\"0\"\n                        allow=\"accelerometer; autoplay; clipboard-write; encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture\"\n                        allowfullscreen><\/iframe>\n                <\/div>\n            <\/div>\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/section>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-center\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt\"><em>Si tu veux aller plus loin et progresser en anglais toujours + vite, on te conseille de regarder ceci ! \ud83d\ude0a<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Bon avec tout \u00e7a, tu devrais \u00eatre bien par\u00e9 pour tout d\u00e9chirer le jour J. On esp\u00e8re que maintenant, tu as ta r\u00e9ponse \u00e0 la fameuse question : comment r\u00e9ussir une expression \u00e9crite en anglais au bac ? <em><strong>Good luck, may the force be with you !<\/strong><\/em> \ud83e\uddd9\u200d\u2642\ufe0f<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Cela ne te para\u00eet toujours pas \u00e9vident ? Pense \u00e0 un&nbsp;<strong><a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/cours\/anglais\/online\">prof particulier d&rsquo;anglais en ligne<\/a><\/strong> !<\/p>\n\n\n<section class=\"faq\">\n    <div class=\"container\" itemscope itemtype=\"http:\/\/schema.org\/FAQPage\">\n        <div class=\"faq__title\">\n                        <h2 id=\"les-questions-frequentes\">Les questions fr\u00e9quentes<\/h2>\n                    <\/div>\n         <div class=\"faq__questions\">\n                                                                             <div class=\"faq__questions--item \" itemscope itemprop=\"mainEntity\" itemtype=\"https:\/\/schema.org\/Question\">\n                <div class=\"faq__questions--title  collapsed\">\n                    <p class=\"h4\" itemprop=\"name\">Comment se d\u00e9roule l&rsquo;\u00e9preuve d&rsquo;expression \u00e9crite au bac d&rsquo;anglais ?<\/p>\n                    <svg>\n                        <use\n                        xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#chevron-right\"\/>\n                    <\/svg>\n                <\/div>\n                <div class=\"faq__questions--content\" style=\"max-height: 0px\" itemscope itemprop=\"acceptedAnswer\" itemtype=\"https:\/\/schema.org\/Answer\">\n                    <div itemprop=\"text\"><p>En sp\u00e9 LLCER, l\u2019\u00e9preuve \u00e9crite dure 3h30 : synth\u00e8se en anglais (environ 500 mots) sur 16 points, traduction ou transposition sur 4 points. Les correcteurs attendent un vocabulaire riche et une grammaire irr\u00e9prochable.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n                <\/div>\n             <\/div>\n                                                                 <div class=\"faq__questions--item \" itemscope itemprop=\"mainEntity\" itemtype=\"https:\/\/schema.org\/Question\">\n                <div class=\"faq__questions--title  collapsed\">\n                    <p class=\"h4\" itemprop=\"name\">Quels sont les exercices possibles le jour de l&rsquo;\u00e9preuve ?<\/p>\n                    <svg>\n                        <use\n                        xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#chevron-right\"\/>\n                    <\/svg>\n                <\/div>\n                <div class=\"faq__questions--content\" style=\"max-height: 0px\" itemscope itemprop=\"acceptedAnswer\" itemtype=\"https:\/\/schema.org\/Answer\">\n                    <div itemprop=\"text\"><p>En classe et en contr\u00f4le continu, on peut te proposer plusieurs formats. L&rsquo;essai argumentatif est le plus classique, mais une citation \u00e0 commenter, un dialogue, une lettre ou un article de journal sont des options. Chaque exercice a ses propres codes.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n                <\/div>\n             <\/div>\n                                                                 <div class=\"faq__questions--item \" itemscope itemprop=\"mainEntity\" itemtype=\"https:\/\/schema.org\/Question\">\n                <div class=\"faq__questions--title  collapsed\">\n                    <p class=\"h4\" itemprop=\"name\">C&rsquo;est quoi la m\u00e9thode pour bien r\u00e9ussir son essai en anglais ?<\/p>\n                    <svg>\n                        <use\n                        xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#chevron-right\"\/>\n                    <\/svg>\n                <\/div>\n                <div class=\"faq__questions--content\" style=\"max-height: 0px\" itemscope itemprop=\"acceptedAnswer\" itemtype=\"https:\/\/schema.org\/Answer\">\n                    <div itemprop=\"text\"><p>La m\u00e9thode commence par 5 minutes d&rsquo;analyse du sujet. Un plan d\u00e9taill\u00e9 suit au brouillon avec des arguments illustr\u00e9s par des exemples pr\u00e9cis, comme l&rsquo;usine Ford. Enfin, une relecture de 15 minutes \u00e9limine les fautes de grammaire ou de vocabulaire.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n                <\/div>\n             <\/div>\n                                                                 <div class=\"faq__questions--item \" itemscope itemprop=\"mainEntity\" itemtype=\"https:\/\/schema.org\/Question\">\n                <div class=\"faq__questions--title  collapsed\">\n                    <p class=\"h4\" itemprop=\"name\">Comment faire une bonne introduction pour un essai ?<\/p>\n                    <svg>\n                        <use\n                        xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#chevron-right\"\/>\n                    <\/svg>\n                <\/div>\n                <div class=\"faq__questions--content\" style=\"max-height: 0px\" itemscope itemprop=\"acceptedAnswer\" itemtype=\"https:\/\/schema.org\/Answer\">\n                    <div itemprop=\"text\"><p>Une bonne introduction commence par une accroche, un fait int\u00e9ressant comme la fusillade de Columbine pour le sujet sur les jeux vid\u00e9o. 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