{"id":188889,"date":"2023-12-21T08:57:00","date_gmt":"2023-12-21T07:57:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/introduction-dissertation-philo\/"},"modified":"2024-09-19T15:33:05","modified_gmt":"2024-09-19T13:33:05","slug":"introduction-dissertation-philo","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/introduction-dissertation-philo\/","title":{"rendered":"[Philo] Comment faire une intro en dissertation qui d\u00e9chire ? \ud83d\ude0d"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p><strong>L&rsquo;introduction en philosophie, c&rsquo;est le moment d\u00e9cisif de toute dissertation de philosophie.<\/strong>&nbsp;C&rsquo;est d&rsquo;abord ta premi\u00e8re rencontre avec ton correcteur, c&rsquo;est donc l\u00e0 qu&rsquo;en quelques lignes tu vas lui faire bonne&#8230; ou mauvaise impression. L&rsquo;intro, c&rsquo;est aussi le moment o\u00f9 tu vas raffiner ton sujet pour obtenir un paradoxe clair qui va diriger toute la suite de l&rsquo;argumentation que tu vas mettre en oeuvre dans ta copie.&nbsp;Autant te dire que tu n&rsquo;as pas int\u00e9r\u00eat \u00e0 te rater \u00e0 l&rsquo;allumage ! \ud83d\ude02<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Le probl\u00e8me avec l&rsquo;introduction en dissertation de philo, c&rsquo;est que tous les profs ont leurs marottes, et qu&rsquo;il est difficile de s&rsquo;y retrouver&#8230;<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>Dois-tu faire une accroche ? \u00c0 quel point d\u00e9finir les termes du sujet ? Une probl\u00e9matique, c&rsquo;est forc\u00e9ment une question ? \u00c7a peut se finir avec un point ? C&rsquo;est la m\u00eame chose que le paradoxe ? Et l&rsquo;annonce de plan ? Faut la faire comment ? Qu&rsquo;est-ce qui est attendu au bac ? Est-ce la m\u00eame chose qu&rsquo;aux concours dans le sup\u00e9rieur ? Bref, comment faire une introduction en philosophie ?<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Bref. Autant de questions auxquelles on va te donner une r\u00e9ponse dans cet article !&nbsp;<\/strong>Pour te faire la meilleure synth\u00e8se possible, on a demand\u00e9 \u00e0 tous nos Sherpas en philosophie et culture g\u00e9n\u00e9rale leurs avis. Eh oui, forc\u00e9ment, qui dit super introduction, dit super copie ! \u00c7a va changer ta vie&nbsp;! (ou en tous cas tes notes en philo et c&rsquo;est d\u00e9j\u00e0 pas mal ! ) \ud83d\ude02<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud83d\udc49\ud83c\udffb <strong>Pour t&rsquo;aider, on a joint en bas d&rsquo;article un exemple d&rsquo;introduction faite en pr\u00e9pa HEC d&rsquo;un examen qui a \u00e9t\u00e9 not\u00e9 de 16\/20 ! <\/strong>(Quasi impossible d&rsquo;avoir plus en pr\u00e9pa ^^)<strong> Cela t&rsquo;aidera forc\u00e9ment pour voir tous nos conseils \u00e0 l&rsquo;oeuvre : peu importe ta fili\u00e8re, les grandes lignes d&rsquo;une bonne introduction en philosophie (ou culture g\u00e9n\u00e9rale) sont toujours les m\u00eames ! &nbsp;<\/strong>Si tu pr\u00e9pares le bac, pas besoin d&rsquo;aller aussi loin, tiens toi \u00e0 la m\u00e9thode expliqu\u00e9e avant. Pour la pr\u00e9pa HEC, int\u00e8gre ce qui est optionnel, c&rsquo;est exactement ce qu&rsquo;il faut faire. Enfin, si tu es dans une autre fili\u00e8re de pr\u00e9pa, \u00e0 toi d&rsquo;un peu adapter !<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Alors, pr\u00eat \u00e0 te sentir l&rsquo;\u00e2me d&rsquo;un Platon ou d&rsquo;un Socrate ? \ud83d\ude09\u270c\ud83c\udffb<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n<section class=\"read-also\">\n    <p class=\"read-also__title\">\u00c0 lire aussi<\/p>\n            <div class=\"read-also__list\">\n            <p>Tu cherchais plut\u00f4t la m\u00e9thode des \u00e9preuves de philo du bac ? \ud83d\udcad C&rsquo;est juste l\u00e0 :<br data-rich-text-line-break=\"true\" \/>\u2705 <a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/introduction-dissertation-philo\/\">M\u00e9thode de la dissertation de philo au bac<\/a> \ud83d\udc96<br data-rich-text-line-break=\"true\" \/>\u2705 <a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/methode-explication-de-texte-philo\/\">M\u00e9thode de l&rsquo;explication de texte en philo au bac<\/a> \u2728<strong data-rich-text-format-boundary=\"true\"><br data-rich-text-line-break=\"true\" \/><\/strong><\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/section>\n\n\n<section class=\"relance\">\n        <div >\n                            <a target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/cours\/philosophie\">\n                    <div class=\"relance__container\"\n                        >\n                        \n                                                        <picture>\n                            <source srcset=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2023\/07\/relance-cours-particulier-8.jpg\" media=\"(min-width: 999px)\">\n                            <source srcset=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2023\/07\/relance-cours-particulier-8.jpg\" media=\"(max-width: 999px)\">\n                                <img decoding=\"async\"\n                                    src=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2023\/07\/relance-cours-particulier-8.jpg\"\n                                    alt=\"Personne qui donne des cours particuliers\"\n                                >\n                            <\/picture>\n                                                <div class=\"relance__content\">\n                            \n                                <div class=\"relance__title\"> <p>Besoin d&rsquo;une aide plus personnalis\u00e9e en philo ? Nos profs sont l\u00e0 pour toi ! \u2705<\/p>\n<\/div>\n                                                        <button type=\"button\"\n                                    class=\"relance__button btn btn-white\">\n                                Le premier cours est offert !\n                            <\/button>\n                        <\/div>\n                    <\/div>\n                <\/a>\n                    <\/div>\n    <\/section>\n\n    \n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"la-phrase-daccroche-ou-comment-bien-commencer-son-intro\">La phrase d&rsquo;accroche ou comment bien commencer son intro \ud83c\udfa3<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Il existe trois types d&rsquo;accroches pour une introduction en dissertation de philo :<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li><strong>Les accroches pourries :<\/strong>&nbsp;tu cites un fait d&rsquo;actualit\u00e9 alors que tu es en philo&#8230; #LesAngesBonjour ou alors tu parles d&rsquo;une r\u00e9f\u00e9rence en mode \u00e9talage de culture, mais en fait \u00e7a n&rsquo;a rien \u00e0 voir. Ne tente m\u00eame pas, c&rsquo;est grill\u00e9 \u00e0 des kilom\u00e8tres ! \ud83d\ude02<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Les accroches inexistantes :<\/strong>&nbsp;z\u00e9ro prise de risque, mais z\u00e9ro diff\u00e9renciation aussi. Bon ce n&rsquo;est pas dingue, mais au moins si tes d\u00e9finitions sont faites comme il faut, tu ne vas pas te taper la honte avec ton correcteur. Il va juste partir avec un petit \u00e0 priori n\u00e9gatif&#8230; \ud83d\ude1d Plus s\u00e9rieusement, l&rsquo;accroche n&rsquo;est pas obligatoire, mais ce sera toujours mieux avec une accroche ! D&rsquo;autant que ce n&rsquo;est pas tr\u00e8s difficile \u00e0 faire une fois qu&rsquo;on t&rsquo;a expliqu\u00e9 comment ! (On y arrive ^^)<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Les bonnes accroches des familles :<\/strong>&nbsp;ce sont celles qui consistent en l&rsquo;utilisation d&rsquo;une r\u00e9f\u00e9rence culturelle exacte (philosophique, litt\u00e9raire, artistique&#8230;) poursuivie par une analyse courte et efficace qui montre au correcteur que tu as intuitivement saisi le paradoxe du sujet, et tout \u00e7a en 3-5 lignes.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud83d\udc49\ud83c\udffb <strong>Attention :<\/strong> <strong>il ne s&rsquo;agit pas de mettre une citation ou une r\u00e9f\u00e9rence bidon pour faire joli.<\/strong> Tu dois plut\u00f4t relier ton <a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/phrase-daccroche\/\">accroche<\/a> directement au sujet pour que cela fonctionne ! <strong>Idem pour l&rsquo;exc\u00e8s inverse qui consiste \u00e0 faire une accroche trop longue de 10 lignes. On r\u00e9p\u00e8te : 3-5 lignes pour l&rsquo;accroche, pas plus. <\/strong>(En pr\u00e9pa, tu verras dans l&rsquo;exemple plus bas qu&rsquo;on peut faire un peu plus long, mais c&rsquo;est plus subtil).<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud83d\udc49\ud83c\udffb <strong>Pendant l&rsquo;ann\u00e9e, rassemble un stock de citations et\/ou de r\u00e9f\u00e9rences utiles sur les diff\u00e9rents th\u00e8mes de l&rsquo;ann\u00e9e et apprends-les par coeur.<\/strong> Le jour J, il ne te restera plus qu&rsquo;\u00e0 ressortir une citation ou une r\u00e9f\u00e9rence li\u00e9e au th\u00e8me qui tombe, et \u00e0 l&rsquo;analyser. Hop ! Le tour est jou\u00e9 !<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud83d\udc49\ud83c\udffb <strong>Pour trouver des citations canons et faire ton march\u00e9<\/strong>, <strong>un seul site, <a href=\"http:\/\/evene.lefigaro.fr\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">Le Figaro EVENE<\/a><\/strong> mais aussi notre article sur <a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/liste-de-citations-philosophiques-expliquees\/\" data-type=\"post\" data-id=\"189724\">les citations en philosophie<\/a>. Dans la recherche, tape le th\u00e8me consid\u00e9r\u00e9, par exemple \u00ab\u00a0la libert\u00e9\u00a0\u00bb et collecte des citations aussi compl\u00e9mentaires que possible et qui te plaisent. Pour les r\u00e9f\u00e9rences, \u00e7a se fait au fil de l&rsquo;eau : tes professeurs t&rsquo;en l\u00e2cheront s\u00fbrement des pratiques dans des corrig\u00e9s, tu pourras aussi en trouver gr\u00e2ce \u00e0 tes lectures. \u00c0 toi de faire preuve d&rsquo;imagination !<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Honn\u00eatement, pas besoin d&rsquo;apprendre 70 citations ou r\u00e9f\u00e9rences pour tes accroches.&nbsp;<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li><strong>Au bac,<\/strong> assure-toi d&rsquo;avoir tous les chapitres parfaitement couverts avec au moins 4-5 citations par grand th\u00e8me. \u00c0 nouveau, vise la compl\u00e9mentarit\u00e9 entre tes citations pour qu&rsquo;elles forment un tout utilisable en toutes circonstances.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Adopte cette m\u00eame logique si tu as un programme avec beaucoup de chapitres.<\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Si tu as un concours avec un th\u00e8me pour l&rsquo;ann\u00e9e comme en pr\u00e9pa HEC<\/strong>, <strong>un stock d&rsquo;une dizaine d&rsquo;accroches types fait largement le travail.<\/strong> <\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Si tu fais les choses bien, tu feras bonne impression aupr\u00e8s de ton correcteur<\/strong>, tu le mets dans de bonnes dispositions, et ce ne sera que de bon augure pour la suite de ta copie ! \ud83e\udd73<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud83d\udc49\ud83c\udffb <strong>Les citations, c&rsquo;est le grand classique. Une r\u00e9f\u00e9rence litt\u00e9raire ou philosophique li\u00e9e au sujet et analys\u00e9e avec pr\u00e9cision est encore plus \u00e9l\u00e9gante et donc diff\u00e9renciante (cf. la copie plus bas).&nbsp;<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n<section class=\"push \">\n        <div >\n            \n                                                <div class=\"push__container  qcd\" data-target=\"_self\" data-qcd=\"aHR0cHM6Ly9zaGVycGFzLmNvbS9mdW5uZWwtc3R1ZGVudC1xdWFsaWZpY2F0aW9u\" data-banner=\"2\" data-name=\"CPM1 Philosophie\" style=\"background-color: #F3FBF7\" >\n                                                                        <div class=\"push__teachers\">\n    <div class=\"d-flex justify-content-center d-md-none\">\n        <img decoding=\"async\" class=\"push__logo\" src=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/logo.svg\" alt=\"Logo Sherpas\">\n    <\/div>\n    <div class=\"swiper\">\n        <div class=\"swiper-wrapper\">\n                                            <div 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xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">12\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Victor2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Victor<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">ESCP<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">25\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                    <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/div>\n                                                    <div class=\"push__content\">\n                                                            <div  class=\"d-none d-md-block\" >\n                                    <img decoding=\"async\" class=\"push__logo\" src=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/logo.svg\"\n                                        alt=\"Logo Sherpas\">\n                                <\/div>\n                                                                                        <div class=\"push__title\"><p>Besoin d&rsquo;un <span style=\"color: #4cc583;\">prof particulier<\/span> de philosophie ? <span role=\"image\" aria-label=\"\u2728\">\u2728<\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n                                                                                        <div class=\"push__text\"><p>Nos Sherpas sont l\u00e0 pour t&rsquo;aider \u00e0 progresser et prendre confiance en toi !<\/p>\n<\/div>\n                                                        <div class=\"push__promo-button   \">\n                                                                                                    <div\n                                        class=\"btn btn-primary\"\n                                        style=\"color: ; border-color: ; background-color: \"\n\n                                    >\n                                        JE PRENDS UN COURS OFFERT !\n                                    <\/div>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                    <\/div>\n                                    <\/div>\n                                    <\/div>\n    <\/section>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"commence-par-bien-definir-les-termes-du-sujet\">Commence par bien d\u00e9finir les termes du sujet \ud83d\udea8<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>Bon, tu viens de faire une bonne accroche pour ton introduction de dissertation de philosophie. <em>Good news, <\/em>car a priori, le correcteur te trouve plut\u00f4t sympa et (relativement) \u00e9rudit gr\u00e2ce \u00e0 tes citations ou r\u00e9f\u00e9rences apprises avec pr\u00e9caution&#8230;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud83d\udc49\ud83c\udffb <strong>C&rsquo;est le moment de montrer tout ton s\u00e9rieux et ta compr\u00e9hension du sujet gr\u00e2ce \u00e0 une d\u00e9finition des termes du sujet aux petits oignons !&nbsp;<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u274c <strong>\u00c0 ne pas faire :<\/strong> ne pas d\u00e9finir, mal d\u00e9finir, d\u00e9finir de mani\u00e8re impr\u00e9cise, oublier des termes, juxtaposer les d\u00e9finitions sans les lier les unes avec les autres. Faire un truc lourd, juxtapos\u00e9, artificiel.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u2705 <strong>\u00c0 faire :<\/strong> la d\u00e9finition des termes du sujet doit \u00eatre progressive et int\u00e9gr\u00e9e au sein de ta d\u00e9rive vers le paradoxe. D\u00e9finis les termes d&rsquo;abord un \u00e0 un, puis ensemble, en glissant progressivement vers ton paradoxe. On t&rsquo;explique \u00e7a juste en dessous.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud83d\udc49\ud83c\udffb <strong>Bref, d\u00e9finir les termes du sujet est INDISPENSABLE. <\/strong>D\u00e9finir les termes de ton sujet c&rsquo;est bien. Mais si tu le fais de mani\u00e8re scolaire (la libert\u00e9 c&rsquo;est &#8230;, l&rsquo;individu c&rsquo;est&#8230;), ton introduction en dissertation de philo ne ressemblera \u00e0 rien ! Pour que cela soit bien fait, tu dois d\u00e9river vers le paradoxe&#8230;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Si tu cherches simplement perfectionner ta ma\u00eetrise de la dissertation en philosophie, notre plateforme te propose des <a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/cours\/philosophie\">cours particuliers en philosophie<\/a> pour te guider vers l&rsquo;excellence acad\u00e9mique. \ud83e\udd13<\/p>\n\n\n<section class=\"read-also\">\n    <p class=\"read-also__title\">\u00c0 lire aussi<\/p>\n            <div class=\"read-also__list\">\n            <p>\u2705 Tu as peur de ne pas retenir tes accroches ? Apprends les gr\u00e2ce \u00e0 Anki, comme expliqu\u00e9 dans notre <a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/comment-apprendre-par-coeur-rapidement\/\">article sur comment apprendre par coeur !<\/a>\u00a0\ud83d\udc96<\/p>\n\n        <\/div>\n    <\/section>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"la-derive-vers-le-paradoxe\">La d\u00e9rive vers le paradoxe&#8230; \u26f5\ufe0f<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud83d\udc49\ud83c\udffb <strong>Chaque d\u00e9finition choisie doit \u00eatre d\u00e9taill\u00e9e et mise en relation avec un pan du sujet.<\/strong> Tu dois progressivement encha\u00eener les d\u00e9finitions en d\u00e9finissant chaque terme et en faisant varier leurs sens. Pense aussi \u00e0 analyser les termes du sujet ind\u00e9pendamment, puis ensemble.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud83d\udc49\ud83c\udffb <strong>En d\u00e9finissant correctement, les probl\u00e8mes principaux du sujet, ses paradoxes, vont apparaitre progressivement. C&rsquo;est ce qu&rsquo;on appelle la d\u00e9rive vers le paradoxe.&nbsp;<\/strong>Comme un voilier qui se laisserait porter par le vent, tu te laisses porter par tes d\u00e9finitions, les diff\u00e9rents sens que tu as trouv\u00e9s, pour finalement mettre en \u00e9vidence des probl\u00e8mes que tu vas t\u00e2cher de r\u00e9soudre dans la suite de ta copie. Ces probl\u00e8mes, tu vas les trouver au brouillon, pendant que tu analyses le sujet. Une fois not\u00e9s, tu pourras penser \u00e0 les utiliser dans ton introduction quand ce sera opportun.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud83d\udc49\ud83c\udffb <strong>Cette partie est le coeur de ton introduction en philosophie : en associant d\u00e9finitions puis raffinage du probl\u00e8me, cela prend environ 1 page apr\u00e8s ton accroche.<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter size-large\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/media.giphy.com\/media\/UAkLHNaScd6Zjlx5eZ\/giphy.gif\" alt=\"une femme sur un voilier\"\/><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\"><em>Pour arriver \u00e0 ton paradoxe, tu as besoin de d\u00e9river comme un voilier ! Attention, parfois \u00e7a secoue !&nbsp;\ud83c\udf0a<\/em><\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"comment-faire-une-bonne-problematique\">Comment faire une bonne probl\u00e9matique ? \ud83d\udd0e<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>Tu vas finalement arriver au(x) paradoxe(s) du sujet, ou \u00e0 la probl\u00e9matique.&nbsp;C&rsquo;est pareil.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>C&rsquo;est l&rsquo;aboutissement de ton travail de d\u00e9finitions, <\/strong>en fait, ce sont les derni\u00e8res questions que tu vas te poser apr\u00e8s avoir retourn\u00e9 le sujet dans tous les sens !<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud83d\udc49\ud83c\udffb <strong>Finis le corps de ton introduction en philosophie avec une \u00e0 plusieurs <span style=\"text-decoration: underline\">questions<\/span> <\/strong>(dans ce cas, va de la plus large \u00e0 la plus pr\u00e9cise) qui lient les probl\u00e8mes que tu as fini par soulever pendant ta phase de d\u00e9finition des termes du sujet.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud83d\udc49\ud83c\udffb Cette ou ces questions sont de pr\u00e9f\u00e9rence au style direct : l&rsquo;essentiel c&rsquo;est que ta derni\u00e8re question soit avec un \u00ab\u00a0?\u00a0\u00bb<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong> (Regarde ce qui a \u00e9t\u00e9 fait dans la copie exemple plus bas).&nbsp;<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n<section class=\"push \">\n        <div >\n            \n                                                <div class=\"push__container  qcd\" data-target=\"_self\" data-qcd=\"aHR0cHM6Ly9zaGVycGFzLmNvbS9mdW5uZWwtc3R1ZGVudC1xdWFsaWZpY2F0aW9u\" data-banner=\"2\" data-name=\"CPN1 Lyc\u00e9e\" style=\"background-color: #F3FBF7\" >\n                                                                        <div class=\"push__teachers\">\n    <div class=\"d-flex justify-content-center d-md-none\">\n        <img decoding=\"async\" class=\"push__logo\" src=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/logo.svg\" alt=\"Logo Sherpas\">\n    <\/div>\n    <div class=\"swiper\">\n        <div class=\"swiper-wrapper\">\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Fabien2x.png);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Fabien<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">T\u00e9l\u00e9com Paris<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">20\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Sophie2x.png);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Sophie<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">Sciences Po Bordeaux<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">12\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Hugo2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Hugo<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">Insa Lyon<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">16\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Jeanne2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Jeanne<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">Aix-Marseille Universit\u00e9<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    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    <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">17\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Bastien2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Bastien<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">Polytechnique<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">26\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Victor2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Victor<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">ESCP<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">25\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Jade2x.jpg);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Jade<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">Sciences Po Paris<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                 <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">21\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            class=\"push__teachers-profil\"\n                            \n                            style=\"background-image: url(https:\/\/sherpas.com\/content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/Emma2x.png);\"\n                        >\n                    <\/div>\n                         <p class=\"push__teachers-name\">Emma<\/p>                          <p class=\"push__teachers-school\">Dauphine<\/p>                                                     <div class=\"push__teachers-note\">\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                                                                    <svg  class=\"active\" >\n                                        <use\n                                            xlink:href=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/sprite.svg#star\"\/>\n                                    <\/svg>\n                   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                                  <p class=\"push__teachers-price\">15\u20ac\/h<\/p>                     <\/div>\n                <\/div>\n                    <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/div>\n                                                    <div class=\"push__content\">\n                                                            <div  class=\"d-none d-md-block\" >\n                                    <img decoding=\"async\" class=\"push__logo\" src=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/logo.svg\"\n                                        alt=\"Logo Sherpas\">\n                                <\/div>\n                                                                                        <div class=\"push__title\"><p>Lyc\u00e9en en gal\u00e8re ? Ton premier cours est offert ! <span role=\"img\" aria-label=\"\ud83c\udf81\">\ud83c\udf81<\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n                                                                                        <div class=\"push__text\"><p>Nos profs sont l\u00e0 pour t\u2019aider \u00e0 progresser !<\/p>\n<\/div>\n                                                        <div class=\"push__promo-button   \">\n                                                                                                    <div\n                                        class=\"btn btn-primary\"\n                                        style=\"color: ; border-color: ; background-color: \"\n\n                                    >\n                                        J&rsquo;EN PROFITE MAINTENANT !\n                                    <\/div>\n                                                            <\/div>\n                                                    <\/div>\n                                    <\/div>\n                                    <\/div>\n    <\/section>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"pour-finir-par-lindispensable-annonce-du-plan\">Pour finir par l&rsquo;indispensable annonce du plan \ud83c\udfaf<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>Le correcteur doit directement comprendre ce que tu vas essayer de d\u00e9montrer dans chaque partie, mais tu dois tout de m\u00eame rester \u00e0 un niveau de teasing. Tu ne peux pas tout dire dans ton accroche !<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>L&rsquo;annonce de plan doit \u00eatre compos\u00e9e de 3 grandes phrases qui s&rsquo;encha\u00eenent : en philo, on est en plein dans la tradition fran\u00e7aise de la d\u00e9marche d&rsquo;analyse synth\u00e8se.<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-center\"><strong>Il s&rsquo;agit d&rsquo;aller du plus simple au plus compliqu\u00e9, pour que ton plan avance : &nbsp;<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-center\"><span style=\"font-size: 14pt\"><strong>P1 (Doxa) \u27a1\ufe0f&nbsp;P2 (D\u00e9passement de la Doxa) \u27a1\ufe0f P3 Synth\u00e8se.&nbsp;<\/strong><\/span><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>P1 &#8211; La Doxa :<\/strong> c&rsquo;est ce que va directement penser Monsieur tout le monde sur le paradoxe. C&rsquo;est du bon sens. C&rsquo;est l&rsquo;opinion commune. Elle comporte souvent une part de v\u00e9rit\u00e9, mais elle est forc\u00e9ment insuffisante, un peu r\u00e9ductrice.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>P2 &#8211; D&rsquo;o\u00f9 le d\u00e9passement de la Doxa :<\/strong> on va montrer que les choses sont plus nuanc\u00e9es, plus complexes. La copie avance.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>P3 &#8211; Synth\u00e8se :<\/strong> tu formules une r\u00e9ponse \u00e0 ton ou tes Paradoxes soulev\u00e9s en introduction de philosophie. Et tu apportes une derni\u00e8re couche de nuance.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>\ud83d\udc49\ud83c\udffb ATTENTION : ne va jamais te contredire entre tes parties dans une copie.<\/strong> Tu ne peux pas faire P1 (Blanc), P2 (Noir). Le correcteur va se dire que tu ne comprends rien ! Il faut plut\u00f4t faire P1 (gris fonc\u00e9 qui est vrai), P2 (gris clair qui est aussi vrai, mais qui compl\u00e8te et va plus loin que le gris fonc\u00e9), P3 (synth\u00e8se : tu passes \u00e0 la couleur, mais les nuances de gris existent aussi, tu vas juste encore plus loin) !<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud83d\udc49\ud83c\udffb <strong>Les plans en 2 parties ne marchent pas en philosophie.<\/strong> Ils t&rsquo;incitent forc\u00e9ment \u00e0 faire un Oui \/ Non, un Non \/ Oui, un Oui \/ Mais ou un Non \/ Mais. En utilisant ces sch\u00e9mas, tu ne peux pas faire avancer ton argumentation, les parties sont juxtapos\u00e9es, \u00e7a ne fonctionne pas. Un plan en 3 parties permet en revanche de te faire avancer, c&rsquo;est ce que tu dois faire.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud83d\udc49\ud83c\udffb <strong>Au cas o\u00f9 ce ne serait pas assez clair, oui, tu dois r\u00e9pondre clairement \u00e0 la probl\u00e9matique \/ au paradoxe avec ta partie 3.<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud83d\udc49\ud83c\udffb Pour ton annonce de plan : <strong>\u00e9vite les trop scolaires \u00ab\u00a0premi\u00e8rement, deuxi\u00e8mement, etc..\u00a0\u00bb Ou les \u00ab\u00a0dans un&nbsp;premier temps nous d&rsquo;abord que&#8230;.\u00a0\u00bb C&rsquo;est atrocement scolaire ! Pr\u00e9f\u00e8re l&rsquo;utilisation de mots de liaisons <\/strong>(cf. l&rsquo;exemple en dessous).<strong> Tu peux \u00e9ventuellement&nbsp;mettre (I), (II) et (III) \u00e0 la fin de chacune de tes phrases.&nbsp;<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n<section class=\"video\">\n    <div class=\"container\">\n        <div class=\"row justify-content-center\">\n            <div class=\"col-12 col-lg-10\">\n                <div class=\"embed-responsive embed-responsive-16by9\">\n                <iframe src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/dRK60qH5ons\"\n                        title=\"YouTube video player\" frameborder=\"0\"\n                        allow=\"accelerometer; autoplay; clipboard-write; encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture\"\n                        allowfullscreen><\/iframe>\n                <\/div>\n            <\/div>\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/section>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-center\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt\"><em>Pour en apprendre encore plus sur la m\u00e9thode de l&rsquo;introduction, on te conseille vivement de regarder cette vid\u00e9o<\/em> <\/span>\ud83d\ude0d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Pour comprendre les subtilit\u00e9s d&rsquo;une bonne dissertation, pourquoi ne pas te tourner vers nos <a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/cours\/philosophie\">cours de soutien en philosophie <\/a>? Ils sont con\u00e7us pour t&rsquo;aider \u00e0 exceller. \ud83c\udf1f<\/p>\n\n\n<section class=\"push \">\n        <div >\n            \n                                                <div class=\"push__container  qcd\" data-target=\"_self\" data-qcd=\"aHR0cHM6Ly9zaGVycGFzLmNvbS9mdW5uZWwtc3R1ZGVudC1xdWFsaWZpY2F0aW9u\" data-banner=\"2\" data-name=\"CPM\u00e9thodo\" style=\"background-color: #F3FBF7\" >\n                                                                        <div class=\"push__teachers\">\n    <div class=\"d-flex justify-content-center d-md-none\">\n        <img decoding=\"async\" class=\"push__logo\" src=\"\/content\/themes\/sherpas-theme\/dist\/images\/logo.svg\" alt=\"Logo Sherpas\">\n    <\/div>\n    <div class=\"swiper\">\n        <div class=\"swiper-wrapper\">\n                                            <div class=\"swiper-slide\">\n                    <div class=\"push__teachers-card\">\n                        <div\n                            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lignes bien faites).<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>La phase de d\u00e9finition des termes du sujet. Tu commences par d\u00e9finir les termes, gr\u00e2ce \u00e0 ces d\u00e9finitions, tu soul\u00e8ves des probl\u00e8mes, tu les interroges, tu d\u00e9rives&#8230; (1 page environ)<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>&#8230; Pour finir \u00e0 ton paradoxe \/ ta probl\u00e9matique. (3-5 lignes en fonction du nombre de questions)<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Tu finis par une annonce de plan claire ! (4 \u00e0 7 lignes environ)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Voici un exemple d&rsquo;introduction en dissertation de philo qui a tr\u00e8s bien march\u00e9 avec un 16\/20 en Pr\u00e9pa ! Si tu fais un truc qui ressemble au Bac autant dire que tu auras une tr\u00e8s bonne note \ud83d\ude02, et en Pr\u00e9pa c&rsquo;est vraiment ce qu&rsquo;il faut faire ! \ud83d\ude09\ud83d\udc47\ud83c\udffb<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>NB :<\/strong> <strong>Il s&rsquo;agit d&rsquo;une intro de culture g\u00e9n\u00e9rale, une mati\u00e8re qui m\u00eale philosophie et litt\u00e9rature.<\/strong> Si tu es uniquement en philo, pr\u00e9f\u00e8re un exemple philosophique pour ouvrir. Mais au niveau bac, un exemple litt\u00e9raire fait quand m\u00eame l&rsquo;affaire, le niveau d&rsquo;exigence n&rsquo;est pas le m\u00eame, et la philo du lyc\u00e9e ressemble \u00e0 la culture g\u00e9n\u00e9rale de pr\u00e9pa HEC.<\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/content\/uploads\/2021\/10\/Capture-decran-2019-04-10-a-09.31.55.png\" alt=\"D\u00e9but d'Introduction de Philosophie\" class=\"wp-image-9773\"\/><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"remarques-sur-cette-premiere-page-dintroduction-en-philosophie-en-exemple\"><strong>Remarques sur cette premi\u00e8re page d&rsquo;introduction en philosophie en exemple :<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li><strong>Mon accroche standard :<\/strong> vu que j&rsquo;\u00e9tais en pr\u00e9pa avec un programme sur l&rsquo;ann\u00e9e (L&rsquo;Espace en 2014), <strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline\">Le Joueur d&rsquo;\u00c9chec<\/span> <\/strong>de <strong>Zweig<\/strong> faisait partie de mon petit stock d&rsquo;accroche qui marchait tr\u00e8s bien. Je l&rsquo;utilisais tr\u00e8s r\u00e9guli\u00e8rement en d\u00e9but de copie. \u00c0 chaque fois, j&rsquo;adaptais les d\u00e9tails que j&rsquo;utilisais au sujet. Note qu&rsquo;avec ces d\u00e9tails je montre au correcteur que je connais vraiment l&rsquo;oeuvre. (En r\u00e9alit\u00e9 tu peux n&rsquo;avoir lu que les pages concern\u00e9es&#8230; #TechniquedeSioux \ud83d\ude1d)<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Bon, c&rsquo;est vrai que j&rsquo;\u00e9tais m\u00eame au niveau du dessus, qui n&rsquo;est pas attendu pour le bac<\/strong> (et qui est attendu seulement pour les bons \u00e9l\u00e8ves en pr\u00e9pa) : <strong>je glissais avec fluidit\u00e9 de mon accroche \u00e0 la d\u00e9finition des termes du sujet, en d\u00e9veloppant consid\u00e9rablement l&rsquo;exemple de mon accroche.<\/strong> Pour le bac, tu peux largement te limiter \u00e0 une citation, ce sera d\u00e9j\u00e0 tr\u00e8s bien. En revanche, en pr\u00e9pa, essaye pour voir ce que \u00e7a donne !<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Remarque comment je d\u00e9finis sur le moment les termes en les liant toujours directement au sujet. Les&nbsp;d\u00e9filions ne sont pas amen\u00e9es de mani\u00e8re lourde ou pataude. Elles viennent naturellement.&nbsp;<\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/blog\/content\/uploads\/2021\/10\/Capture-decran-2019-04-10-a-09.32.05.png\" alt=\"Introduction de Philo deuxi\u00e8me partie\" class=\"wp-image-9774\"\/><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"remarques-sur-cette-seconde-page-dintroduction-de-philosophie-en-exemple\">Remarques sur cette seconde page d&rsquo;introduction de philosophie en exemple :<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li><strong>La petite phrase \u00ab\u00a0on peut en arriver \u00e0 se demander\u00a0\u00bb fonctionne tr\u00e8s bien<\/strong> pour amener la premi\u00e8re question qui tiendra lieu de paradoxe.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>La probl\u00e9matique est volontairement large pour permettre un traitement de tous les aspects du sujet<\/strong> et aussi \u00e9voquer des questions un peu plus secondaires. Forc\u00e9ment, tu dois avoir la mati\u00e8re pour \u00e7a. Au Bac, n&rsquo;h\u00e9site pas \u00e0 faire plus pr\u00e9cis pour mieux cadrer ton sujet et \u00e9viter un H.S.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Note que la P3 donne des \u00e9l\u00e9ments de r\u00e9ponse clairs au sujet.&nbsp;<\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter size-large\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/media.giphy.com\/media\/1X7wkXRCBRjSLEl7te\/giphy.gif\" alt=\"un jury de &quot;the voice&quot; qui applaudit\"\/><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\"><em>Voil\u00e0 ce que ton correcteur va penser si tu suis nos conseils ! \ud83d\ude09<\/em><\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n\n\n<p>Peaufine ton approche de la dissertation en philosophie avec un <a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/cours\/philosophie\/online\">prof particulier de philo en ligne<\/a> pour une performance optimale au bac ou en pr\u00e9pa. \ud83d\udca1<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"conclusion-sur-la-methode-de-lintroduction-en-philo\">Conclusion sur la m\u00e9thode de l&rsquo;introduction en philo \u270c\ud83c\udffb<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Voil\u00e0, tu sais d\u00e9sormais comment faire une intro en philo ou en culture g\u00e9n\u00e9rale ! \ud83d\ude0a<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>\u00c0 nouveau, si tu es au lyc\u00e9e,<strong> n&rsquo;h\u00e9site pas \u00e0 faire un peu plus l\u00e9ger que ce qui est montr\u00e9.<\/strong> Tu as moins de m\u00e9tier, c&rsquo;est normal que l&rsquo;exercice ne soit pas encore hyper naturel.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Dans tous les cas,<strong> pioche dans les conseils, avance pas \u00e0 pas,&nbsp;<\/strong>et fais des essais pour arriver \u00e0 quelque chose qui fonctionne pour toi : c&rsquo;est l&rsquo;essentiel.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>Si tu suis cette m\u00e9thode de l&rsquo;introduction en dissertation de philo, tu vas forc\u00e9ment faire de beaux progr\u00e8s ! \u00c7a a march\u00e9 pour nous, \u00e7a va marcher pour toi ! \ud83d\udc96 Et si besoin, tu peux toujours compter sur nos <a href=\"https:\/\/sherpas.com\/cours\/philosophie\">profs particuliers de philosophie<\/a> pour t&rsquo;aider. <\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"kk-star-ratings kksr-auto kksr-align-center kksr-valign-bottom\"\n    data-payload='{&quot;align&quot;:&quot;center&quot;,&quot;id&quot;:&quot;188889&quot;,&quot;slug&quot;:&quot;default&quot;,&quot;valign&quot;:&quot;bottom&quot;,&quot;ignore&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;reference&quot;:&quot;auto&quot;,&quot;class&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;count&quot;:&quot;96&quot;,&quot;legendonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;readonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;score&quot;:&quot;4.1&quot;,&quot;starsonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;best&quot;:&quot;5&quot;,&quot;gap&quot;:&quot;5&quot;,&quot;greet&quot;:&quot;Tu as aim\u00e9 cet article ?&quot;,&quot;legend&quot;:&quot;4.1\\\/5 - (96 votes)&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:&quot;24&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;[Philo] Comment faire une intro en dissertation qui d\u00e9chire ? 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